Request Feedback: www.QueenofAmazon.com

[CindyBrock]

Hi All!

If you get a chance, swing by http://QueenofAmazon.com/ and let me know what you think.

I've created a survey (http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/7M8V6FC) with some specific data I'd like to gather!
(The survey will expire on Sunday, June 20, 2010.)

Thanks!


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[premiumweb]

Hey Cindy! I really like the page. Good job.

Two typos I saw:

As is a professional writer and trainer ... some viewing pictures, and still other's a combination of both!

Also, you talk about purchasing in April 2010 at the bottom so you may want to remove that or change it.

[cindywatts]

Wow Cindy, great job!!! I want to learn how to do that. Maybe some of your creativity will rub off on me at NAMS :)

[Engage]

Looks quite excellent to me. All I can think of is...

1) Did you research the legal aspects of using a big brand name in your URL? I don't know the law myself, but one time I used the name Ray Charles in a URL, and a nasty NY lawyer found me pretty quick and started piling on the threats etc.

2) Maybe some device for creating a personal connection between you and reader? Who are they buying from? A video down at the bottom near your signature?

You do nice work, thumbs up!

[CindyBrock]

Hey there...

Try refreshing your page. The April date was removed so you must be viewing a cached paged.

I fixed the typo! ;)

[premiumweb]

Got the June date this time. One typo is still there though.

"and still other's a combination of both"

should be "and still others, a combination of both" :o

[gailjrichardson]

Cindy, I think your site looks great. You do a very good job in setting a site up. I hope to learn so tricks from you at NAMS.
Gail

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[Steve Gilbert]

Cindy, I think your site looks great and the choice of either #1, #2 or #3 is a slick touch too!

I also have a concern about the trademark name in the title - this may be asking for a slap from the big A.

Best,
Steve

[CindyBrock]

To all those who mentioned concerns about the name, there is no issue using the word "Amazon" in a URL. Why? The word "Amazon" itself cannot be copyrighted, trademarked, etc.

Queen of Amazon was really just a placeholder URL until I could decide on something "official." I have changed the URL to SecretsforSellingonAmazon.com for the obvious reasons: keywords, better recognition, etc.

I have added my picture to the bottom of the page. (For some reason, I just always assumed it was there. Go figure!) I also have all the notes from the Brainstorming call on Monday night and am making those changes.

Thanks for the comments so far!

[premiumweb]

Just noticed the survey. If you'll email me the link to the live page, I'll run it through Scribe SEO to see what it says as far as keywords and such.

[Carol Ann Q]

Wow! I am impressed. I love your whole concept and the way you have set it up. Good jobb - it makes me want to find out more.