Can you help choose a headline?

One of my clients is producing a flyer and we would really appreciate your input regarding headline.

I've set up a Surveymonkey question here which you can select your choice from.

http://www.surveymonkey.com/s/BX8L977

I'd really appreciate you taking a minute to take a look.

Thanks - I really appreciate it.

hello jez,
i just went with the 2nd option that said "...by professional camera absolutely free" but overall i thought it cant be done in a much better way. none of those were appealing or those that will make you read the entire brochure.

I think that your client can try out a few more ideas before finalizing any one.

I went for number 2 also - gorgeous headline!

Hope it has some great pics too!

:-)

At the risk of "following the crowd too much," I too chose #2. While the others have merit also, #2 stands out as short, simple and to the point.

Good luck to your client.

Thanks to you all for your comments - we really appreciate it.

Choosing a headline is not an exact science - you go with educated guess and gut feel, and I know that not all of the headlines will appeal (in some cases maybe non of them), and to be fair, I appreciate that you probably need a little more info, such as opening paragraph etc., but I wanted something quick and dirty to see if we were heading in a useable direction.

So far there have been 236 responses from here, twitter and other people on my list, and the results so far have surprised even me - not what I expected.

Also, thanks to those of you who added your own ideas - there have been some great one I want to test on the next version!

I'll leave it running a little longer then post the top 3 here!

Thanks again.

#2 was my favorite

Hi Jez,

Since I don't see anything about keywords, I'm assuming this flyer is for offline use only?

If so, I think that the same rules apply to an offline title as to an online one and getting the readers attention should be the goal. Just a thought, but what if you used something like, "How to have the tour of your dreams captured on film, absolutely free" or something like that.

Leigha

Voted. Hope you're getting it narrowed down now.