Review of landing page

[jgbama]

Would you look at my landing page and tell what you think.If it loses you ,where and why.I'm using article marketing in a couple of ways but not making sales. I want to find out why and fix the problem.I would appreciate all the help you can give. the page is cheapreliablehosting.blogspot.com

Thanks for the help
jerry

[Lynn Terry]

Hi Jerry,

Are your articles linking to that blogger blog? I looked up your inbound links on Yahoo Site Explorer and I don't see ANY links pointing to that page other than internal links:

http://siteexplorer.search.yahoo.com...&fr2=seo-rd-se

The page is very bland, a lot of text and no real "pop" to catch the visitors eye.

[jkgourmet]

Question: how can Jerry know where visitors to his site are coming from? Lik, which article caused the reader to click thru to his site? Is this some of the stuff that WP plug in (like all-in-one-SEO) would provide? If one develops a site on another platform instead of WP, what will provide this info?

(am I hijacking this thread? If so, feel free to delete and I'll start again with a fresh thread.)

[David Jackson]

Question: how can Jerry know where visitors to his site are coming from? Lik, which article caused the reader to click thru to his site? Is this some of the stuff that WP plug in (like all-in-one-SEO) would provide? If one develops a site on another platform instead of WP, what will provide this info?

jk, any good analytics program will provide this type of information. For example Sitemeter, or the analytics program that comes standard with CPanel.

David Jackson

[jkgourmet]

Forgot all about the analytics at cpanel! Thanks for the reminder. So much to learn and remember. . .

[David Jackson]

Forgot all about the analytics at cpanel! Thanks for the reminder. So much to learn and remember. . .

No problem. Anytime.

David Jackson

[jgbama]

Hi Lynn
Thanks Lynn for looking at the page. Yes I have articles pointing at that. What would you suggest I do to the page? Oh I checked out one of the articles and the link goes to the landing page.
Thanks again Lynn

[jgbama]

Good morning all
Yes Lynn I'm using google. AS always I have another question.Maybe soon I can help as much as I'm being helped. My question is how much of an article can I edit that has already been published?

Thanks for all the help jerry

[angienewton]

My question is how much of an article can I edit that has already been published?

Jerry,
Unless it's PLR (Private label content) that you have purchased you cannot edit any articles that have already been published by someone else. You'll need to write your own, hire a ghostwriter or purchase PLR.

Does that help?

[jgbama]

Hi Angie
Sorry for the confusion but they are my articles. I just didn't know how much I could edit. They are not getting the click through rate so I was going to try and improve them.
Thanks for your help