Please Review my Squeeze page - feedback from experienced marketers
Hello!
I have a new squeeze page and would like feedback from experienced marketer please (check signature link)
- Do you find the title appealing?
- Does it get the message across?
- Is it too long?
- Would you subscribe to it or turn your back on it immediately?
It looks ok, but some things are not centered correctly, and your English could be a little better. Also, I wouldn't use phrases such as "I highly recommend this training course to you" - as you are obviously recommending the course to anyone who visits your website (you don't need to say this). Also, I would look at other squeeze pages that are highly persuasive and do something similar to what they do.
Hello Nickitta - 26 free videos is a generous offer. How nice! Along with the other suggestions you've received, I suggest that you remove the yellow highlight from the text where you introduce yourself. Just leave it on the text in the upper left corner. Good luck!
I second the suggestion about the yellow highlight - it makes your page look like an old-style (and cheesy) sales page.
I disagree about needing to make it longer. This is a simple squeeze page with one single goal - to get the sign-up. It's not the same as a sales page where you're asking people to part with money. That often does require a longer page, but I think effective squeeze pages can be quite short.
I would take a look at what you're offering (the bullet points) and answer the question "Why?" Why should the reader care to know how to put a video on his or her site? To you the answer is probably obvious, but to me it's not. I already know how to put a video on my site (or at the very least a quick Google search will teach me). What can you offer me? A faster process? Less bandwidth waste? In other words, what's in it for me?
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