Progressive Headlines Lead Visitors to BUY

By Karon Thackston

Headlines are, without a doubt, one of the most important elements in copywriting.

If you don’t get your visitor’s attention with the headline, the chance of them reading your copy is virtually none.

But headlines (and sub-headlines) play a vital part in the copywriting process for reasons other than capturing attention...

Whether we like it or not, the fact is most people will not read all the copy word for word.

Headlines fill in the blanks in several ways so skimmers still get the gist of the information in the copy. In the same way tweets communicate in short bursts, headlines and sub-headlines can give a complete summary of your copy...

Headlines Outline the Benefits

Using headlines and subheads that state benefits about your product/service can be a powerful strategy. Using wireless home networking for example, you might create headlines and subheads that read:

–Work From Anywhere In Your Home

–No More Jumbled Cables Strung Everywhere

–Have Multiple Computers Online At The Same Time

–Make All The Computer Users In Your Home Happy

Even if the customer didn’t read the copy included in between these heads and subheads, they would still be made aware of all the benefits of having a wireless home network.

Headlines Give An Overview

Depending on the type of copy, headlines can help urge your customers to read further. In fact, in long-form copy, headlines should create their own sub-set of copy. If you read just the headlines, they should make sense all by themselves.

For example, copy about a new book on how to start your own business might use the following headlines:

New Book Takes You Step-by-Step Through Starting Your Own Business

An introduction would go here as well as copy designed to gain the attention of the reader.

Starting A Business Is Easier Than Ever

Continue with the copy here.

The Little Known Secrets In This Book Will Show You How

More copy here.

See? As you read through the headlines and sub-headlines they make sense even without any copy. This serves to give an overview of the information to those customers who may not read every word of the copy you’ve written. If they read just the headlines and subheads, they’ll still understand what you’re offering.

Headlines Can Raise Curiosity

Create “cliff-hangers” with your headlines and only give so much information before stopping. When you use this and other interest builders, you can encourage customers to read further into your copy just to satisfy their curiosity.

Using natural gardening products as our example, the headlines and subheads often look like this:

–My Roses Are Bursting With Blossoms Since I Stopped Watering Them

–My Prize-Winning Tulips Would Wither Up and Die If It Weren’t for…

–Which Annual Blooms Twice As Big When You Give It A Beer/Shampoo Cocktail?

These statements make you think. They start the reader wondering so that he/she continues to read on to get the rest of the story.

When creating headlines in your copy, think about how they all work together. Instead of just plopping bolded words in between paragraphs, create a plan revolving around progressive headlines that can lead your readers to buy.

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Discussion

  1. I especially like the Rose headline. It's counterintuitive, and I want to read that article right now!

    Another important aspect is figuring out how to get those great headlines in front of your market in the first place!

  2. Margarita says

    Karon,
    I have been your subscriber for 2 years now. English is my second language and I find a great value in your copywriting articles. This article is amazing. I was in the middle of creating a headline for my body language report. Something like "My body language skills make me more friends (money)". Any suggestions?
    I like the "cliff hangers". All of the news sites use it.
    Thank you!

  3. Thank you, that is a very informative article! And I totally agree with you that some sales pages are too long these days.

    Here's another powerful headline that I see being used over and over in the internet marketing world:

    Your Insurance Agent Doesn't Want You To Read This Ad

  4. Karen, this is a great post and it's very helpful! Headlines are something I could use some help with. Then again, mycopywriting in general could use some help LOL so maybe I'll sign up for your course.

    Glennette Goodbread, Owner
    Premium Web Design and Hosting

  5. Headlines are so often overlooked by the smaller companies, yet there's so many big companies that are doing it right.

    I find that Magazines have great examples of headlines, so next time you're in line at a store, check them out! 🙂

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